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Are YOU Guilty Of Making These 5 Mistakes In Your Writing?
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Dear friend,
Are you starting to get really frustrated with homework that keeps coming and coming? And it just sucks the life out of you to make grade? Then this might just be the most important message you'll ever read, because I'm about to show you the secret to pumping out essays at lightning speed AND get good grades in the bargain! These secrets are the only reasons why I graduated from one of the country’s highly regarded universities with excellent grades(hint: Donald Trump’s daughter was there at the same time).
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I’m not messing around and trying to make this look interesting. I have to confess that I was horrible student for a long time. I hated writing and took every opportunity to procrastinate and then ended up wroting most of my papers the night before they were due. I think you can guess what kind of grades those papers got... Fortunately for me, I happened to end up doing a semester with this one guy who was able to pass everything without breaking a sweat. Our friendship turned my studies around.
That was many years ago. Today, I'm a lecturer at a university near Baltimore. Over the years I have continued to refine the techniques I learned over that semester. As a lecturer I now read essays from students just like me. And you. Every week of the year. And, somewhat to my surprise, I found a similar pattern of common mistakes that students keep making. By avoiding those mistakes you could easily do a grade or two better. Those mistakes are most likely habits developed in your early years of education, but don’t worry. They are easily avoided.
I originally "published" this guide in 2003 as extra material for my study group. It was an experiment to test the possibility of improving student's grades through the simple solution of better writing techniques. The first batch sold out almost immediately -an as soon as word got out about it, I found myself making multiple printing runs.
So now, instead of contributing to global climate change, I've decided to publish this guide over the Internet. It saves money, so I can make it more affordable for students who aren't exactly swimming in money.
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So let me tell you what you can expect from 2008 Edition of this guide:
- How to write brilliant essays EVEN if you thought "you can´t really write"
- How to keep the ideas flowing and know exactly what to write about
- How to use the minimum amount of time for every assignment by following a simple proven form
- How to put your thoughts into words in the most persuasive manner
- How to become the envy of your class by getting better grades than your competition by working smarter NOT harder
- How to conduct research for your essays on any topic without the worry and the sleepless nights
- How to write a proper bibliography - trust me, you students drive me nuts over this.
- How to structure your essays so that they´re easy to write and a bliss to read
- How to avoid the common mistakes students make while writing (except those who have this guide)
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What Do My Students From All Over The Country Say?
“I´m studying in one of the leading universities in the world and am under immense pressure, not only from my peers and lecturers, but my family at home as well. And the fact that I´m studying Law doesn´t make it any easier. We do a LOT of papers.
I really never got the good grades, not because I didn´t learn things, but because I - quite honestly - suck at writing. Or at least I used to. After reading Dorrman´s guide to essays, everything changed literally overnight. Now 3 months later, I´m up from below average to top of my course - IN EVERY CLASS!” - Jimmy, Cambridge (MA)
“What else I can say. Really, the only thing that has changed for me is the way I write my essays. After reading what Dorrman had to say, I saw the improvement instantly in ALL OF MY CLASSES. If you´re gonna do one thing this year to boost your grades, reading this guide is probably it.” - Laura, Austin (TX)
“I´m a senior now, and if I could go back to my freshman year with even a fraction of the info in this guide at my disposal, I would! But at least I´ll be bringing my newly acquired writing skills along with me in my career. What´s best, I've finally started to have some time for myself too. Jason, you´re the man! Thanks :)” - Mike, Berkeley (CA)
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What You Get With 2008 Edition?
I have gathered some more useful stuff for you in this package.
Bonus #1 - ‘Interviews With The Essay Experts’ series
I've interviewed some of the leading writers in academic world
Now you can get these tips monthly straight to your email
NO SUBSCRIPTION FEE!
Bonus #2 - ‘Ask Any Question’ Card
I’m offering these only to a few (my time is money too!)
Ask something you always wanted to know about writing
I will PERSONALLY answer it for you
Bonus #3 - ‘Lifetime Updates’
This one is really simple, if the guide updates, you’ll get it for free
Yeah, simple as that
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60 Day Iron-Clad Money-Back Guarantee
If you buy this right now, you’ll have 60 days to return the guide and get 100% of your money back. No questions, no hassle.
THE RISK IS ON ME!
I’m not going to lie to you. I have had 0 returns so far and when students know they are covered with money-back guarantee, it’s no- brainer for them and that of course shows in my bottom line in the end. Nobody is that stupid that would abandon a deal where there’s everything to gain and nothing to lose.
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How Much?
The big question - how much do I charge for information that could potentially change a student’s life and make him or her incredibly successful? I guess many students would pay a very nice chunk of cash for that.
The original course material in 2003 cost $50 so if I don’t have to pay for printing and shipping, I would say $10 is fair price? Remember, dollar’s value isn’t what it used to be back in the days. Let’s put it $9.95 so it sounds like real salesman's price...
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Let’s Wrap It Up
If you give me $9.95 now, in return I will give you information that will change your academic career over and skyrocket your grades. Sounds like a no-brainer to me. If you can’t put down $10 for this kind of change and on MY RISK, I think you really should quit school right away and go work at McDonald’s. Yes, I know that sounds harsh but that’s the way it is. Either you up the ante so to speak or you quit and get the minimum wage job.
Your choice. What is it going to be? How much is your future worth to you?
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PS: Due taxation I'm not sure how long I'll be selling this so you really want to hurry up. Tomorrow this might be gone.
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